Okay, so I love this little guy, and figured why not see what kind of stories evolve from your creative minds…
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First of all, I’d like to thank you all for your continued support while I’ve posted and rambled about this particular topic, for what seems like days on end. I appreciate having such a kind and welcoming space to share in.
So…Chapter One: The Brecilian Forest (a fan fiction story based on a video game, Dragon Age), is complete. Yes, chapter one. After some thinking and the revelation of the pleasure this story gave me, I’ve decided to continue the story of my mage according to the game’s timeline; just snippets of events that could have or may have happened while on this adventure.
Potentially 7 chapters overall, with each chapter a different location visited in the game; Redcliffe Village & Castle, Orzammar, the home of the dwarves, The Circle Tower, the home of the mages and my character’s former home, and finally Denerim, the capital city of this fictional land. A lot happens in Denerim, so I’m thinking this will be broken into two chapters, one earlier on in the timeline, and another chapter wrapping up the story as this is where the final battle in the game takes place as well. And then I was thinking, I may need to do a “what happens after all the fighting is over” chapter. I want my happily ever after, or what ever that might mean for my characters.
There is a scene near the end of the game in which a decision must be made that could have a tremendous impact on the characters, and this is something I have always wished to explore, the emotional ramifications of that choice. In the game, there is a short conversation, a snippet of a scene if one choice is made, then it fades to black, never really to be discussed again. Nope, not having it. I want to explore the potential pre and post conversations more in-depth.
This became so much more than I ever intended. One writing prompt image of concept art started it all. I just started writing. I had no idea or concept for the story, no outline, no timeline, or a vision until last night. It all sort of just came together, and now this part of my hero’s journey is complete. It’s a little over 6,500 words and it wrapped up nicely. Well, I think so considering the lack of vision. If you’ve been following along as I’ve posted, I did a little rewriting, so there are newly added scenes.
I wrote the story in the first person because I liked the idea of it almost being like a journal of this character; to see the world through her eyes, to hear her thoughts, to feel her emotions. As a screenwriter, I have to write almost removed from all that because of the style and technique that screenwriting requires. And I truly believe that writing this has helped my writing overall. I was excited to sit down and write, which, as my fellow writers can attest, can sometimes feel like a chore. Sometimes writing is painstaking, a challenge, and we can sit for hours without accomplishing much more than a few sentences. I sat down a few times and wrote 6,500 words. Me. That’s why I entitled this post “an odd sense of accomplishment”. I’m kind of proud.
I’m not sure how to post it, so I’ve added it to the Excerpts section here. I broke it down into 4 sections, but it is all on the same page. I’m also thinking of adding it to the fan fiction website I mentioned the other day, Archive of Our Own, in an effort to be a part of that community. And if you’re wondering how this all began, you can read my post about my Dragon Age Obsession here.
Have a wonderful and productive weekend everyone!
And thanks again! xx, Rach
I still plan on writing something from last week’s prompt, but I’ve been having way too much fun writing my fanfic. Initially, I thought it might be a waste of time, but it is so freeing to write something so different from my screenplays, so yep, there’s lots more to come…
I find this image so intriguing. Maybe you do too? I look forward to seeing your creations this week!
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I am pleased to share with you this week’s submission from redgypsophila of Adventures in Writing, who accepted last week’s writing prompt challenge, and wrote another inventive piece entitled Jill and the Beanstalk. Please give it a read and offer her your support. Again, thank you for sharing your creations!
As for me, I went back to my writer’s group last night – I had taken a small hiatus, and because my computer is on the brink of death, I struggled to write anything. It’s old. Really old. And it strains itself to open each app, sometimes failing. That little color wheel just spins and spins. When I realized it wouldn’t be able to open my email and give me access to the newer version of my script, I settled on writing more Dragon Age fan fiction. From all my time gaming, you’d think I would be better about hitting that little save button, but no…my computer shut down on me mid-type, and I felt those first tinges of fear, that I had lost everything I had just written, about 500 words.
I quickly jotted down, by hand, what I could remember while I prayed to the gods of technology to restore my computer and my words. It took a good 15 mins. for it to turn back on, its poor little motor wheezing the entire time, but success! Document restored! I quickly used the camera on my phone and took a screenshot in case it shut down again. My writing group friends laughed and mocked my outdated tech, but desperate times and all that.
I haven’t had a chance to really go back over what I wrote, but I’d like to post it anyway. Once I do a little rewriting, I’ll post it under the Excerpts section. I hope you enjoy!
III
I called out to my companions as they drew nearer to the creature to not strike at it. Although it had commanded the spiders and every other facet of this environment, I had the innate understanding that it was only protecting its home. There was no reason to strike it down, if anything, it may be helpful to our cause.
I couldn’t tell if the being was a man or woman from this vantage, only that it had sacrificed itself at some point to become the creature of flesh and forest before me. Once the spiders were vanquished and we had the opportunity to regroup, I moved closer to the being to get a better look, despite the protests of my friends. Although it seethed with anger and vibrated with powerful energy, I was compelled to try to speak to it, something about the idea of it having once been a mage.
Along our journey, Alistair had created a holster for my staff. It was a leather strap that I could easily wear across one shoulder so that when I was not using magic, I could be free of the added burden of carrying my weapon. I tucked my staff into its new place upon my back, and gingerly pushed Alistair’s pleading hands aside. I looked into his eyes, his concern for me so visible, that I had to bite back the smile that threatened to break free.
“It will be all right, “ I reassured him resting one hand upon his unshaven cheek. I probably shouldn’t have done that. The heated moment elevated, now fueled further with a desire neither of us was prepared for. We gazed into one another’s eyes for a moment as we both wrestled with our newfound feelings. An interrupting cough from Sten was all that was needed to break the spell. With a heavy, submissive groan, Alistair finally acquiesced and stepped aside. My fingers twitched at the loss of contact.
I took my first few pensive steps with my hands before me in a conciliatory gesture, all the while my companions still at the ready. Both Leliana and Morrigan voiced a final word of caution, to which I nodded silently. As I drew closer, I was able to make out that the being had in fact been a woman at one time. The body was thin and lithe, with soft curves at the hips and breasts; the remnants of which lay hidden beneath the vines that meandered upwards. The face was shielded in a mask of mud and flora, but what remained visible were radiant blue eyes, a long, thin nose, and full lips. Beneath it all, there was still a lovely woman.
I called out softly, in a reassuring tone, that we were not there to harm her. We had happened upon this cave and we were not there to destroy it, her, or her companions. I saw as she worked every word over in her mind in an effort to understand something long forgotten. Her tension alleviated with every word. I stopped a few feet short, not wanting to scare her away, or scare her into greater action. She was powerful, and I wasn’t certain I would be able to resist a direct assault. Her eyes were full of emotion; confusion, fear, and relief. She reached a hand out to me. I heard my friends’ voices of dissent.
To be continued….
Have a wonderful week everyone! And look for the new writing prompt tomorrow! 🙂
Again, no submissions this week, which I was a little disappointed about. C’mon friends, join me in a little free for all writing. I decided to do a few more, six actually, of those flash fiction pieces I’ve been enjoying so much. No forethought. No real editing. Under 200 words each. I wrote these last night…goodness, can you tell I was in a certain mood? *Cringes. I would like to expand upon a few them now though. I hope you enjoy anyway.
The Dark Queen
The Dark Queen looked out upon her subjects and felt nothing. She had lost everything that had ever mattered to her, and she now ruled with an empty heart. Tragedy had not diminished her beauty, and she felt this might be taken as a slight, so she pulled her hair back, dressed in dark clothing, and removed all traces of adornment, except for her crown. She was, after all, the queen. The herald called her subjects to attention, and she came forward, somber, as she had done everyday for the past year. She was at a loss of how to proceed. What could she do to move forward, beyond the pain of loss?
Lovers on the Stairs
Each time they met endangered them further, and yet neither could stay away. The secret tunnel system within the castle allowed them glimpses of moments, but it would never be enough. Each encounter lasted longer and longer until it was unbearable to part. If only they were free to choose their own destiny. If only Fate were that kind. He was being sent abroad. War was at hand. They met for what they believed to be the last time and he held her close. Her emotions were on the brink of shattering her, and she clung to the wall for support. How ever would she bear it?
Remnants
I’d been traveling what was left of the upper world so long; I knew it like the back of my hand. The dark days were all any of my people knew, except for the elders, who spoke of a different time, the time of the light. It was a time when the buildings had reached for the heavens, as had we. Now it was covered in ash, torn down, brick by brick. What remained were the ghosts of the past. What now inhabited those remains were unlike anything anyone had ever seen, except for me, and the few members of my team. Each time we surfaced we risked not only exposure, but also discovery. There was life here; tiny green tentacles of life making their presence known. There were stories of such things, but it was best to keep it to ourselves, at least for the time being, because the rest of the upper world held no place for us. Maybe it was as the elders said, our time had passed.
Getaway
The view from the window gave the impression of peace and solitude, but in fact, it had become the view of her torment. Perhaps if she leapt out the window she would survive the fall, but then what? She was under constant surveillance, and had yet to find a lapse in security that she could use to her advantage. She would spend hours staring out to the water that had once enticed her, but now taunted her. It was paradise, and yet…She had never expected to be seduced, to be swayed, to be taken. Rumors could never have prepared her for such a fate. Her fingernails dug into the cracked and molded windowsill as she decided what course of action might be necessary.
Paradise
She had to be dreaming. Nothing of such vibrancy could ever exist in her land. The image swirled before her eyes, teasing her, tempting her to cross over. Her body swayed ever so slightly forward, her eyes closed longer than they should have as she took a deep breath to smell the fresh air. Her body ached with longing to move forward, to taste, to feel firsthand. She shook her head hard, hoping to clear the fog overcoming her. She would not submit. Pleasure was not to be so easily attained. But her foot took the first step, without her acknowledgment, and it found a solid foundation. Without further persuasion, she was off, running as is she were being chased, and maybe she was, but they would never catch her.
The Festival of Lights
They had met under the lights, and it was in the crimson glow that he had known he would spend the rest of his life trying to make her smile as she had that first night. They were so carefree then, a symbol of their youth. Each year, hand in hand, they would walk under the lanterns, sit on the same bench, and enjoy one another in silence. It was their moment to reflect on their time together, at how under the rosy glow, a young couple so different from one another had found happiness. As he sat on the bench alone for the first time in many years, he smiled the sweet smile that only a life well lived can offer, and he thought of her. For a brief moment, he saw the girl in the yellow dress dancing in the glow of the red lanterns. When she turned smiling at him, giggling breathlessly, he gasped. She ran up to him then, taking him by the hands to lead him down the crimson path.
I’ve added what I’ve written so far of the Dragon Age fan fiction under the Excerpts section, if you’re interested. Also, I’d love to read the stories, poems, or creations from the images you’ve been inspired from, so please, remember to share!
Happy Wednesday!
As you’ve probably noticed, I like different landscapes as writing prompts because of the variety of ideas that can spring forth. I was going to find something different for today, but then I saw the following image. I had a random idea, so I will accept this Writing Prompt Challenge. Who will join me?
Happy Writing! And I look forward to reading your creations!
Last night, I painstakingly rewrote 16 pages; broke out the thesaurus, cut scenes, changed two spaces after periods to one (because that’s evidently the new standard, *ugh), rewrote dialogue and description, and today I’m brain dead.
I was immediately drawn to this image; the contrast of color, the vibrancy, the imagination runs wild…
Happy Writing! And I look forward to your creations!
As writers, we like our routine. I’m starting to fall into one with my blog, which I like. So, it’s Tuesday, which means a review of Writing Prompt submissions.
This week, redgypsophila of Adventures in Writing decided to try something different; writing six pieces from different perspectives to convey a variety of moods. So far she’s posted two, and I can’t wait to read what else she has in store for us. Take a look at this creative idea!
And don’t be shy. If you’d like to participate, find an image I’ve posted, write/create something, and share it! C’mon, you know you want to. 🙂
As for me, this week I didn’t accomplish much writing. I started the framework for a tv pilot that will most likely become an enormous endeavor because it requires creating worlds, races, and all the other ingredients of a space odyssey. Yep, too much Star Wars, Star Trek, Battlestar Galactica, Firefly, Farscape, and Doctor Who. Luckily I have my partner in crime, my sister the Star Wars expert, to help. It should be fun, and I’m excited about the story. I’ll share more once I’ve developed it a bit more.
In the meantime, here’s a little more of my Dragon Age fan fiction. Continuing on…
I could barely think clearly as pain shot through every inch of my being. The prison had this side effect of lifting its victim mid-air while it inflicted its pain, my feet dangled pathetically just above the ground. I would remain helpless for a short time, unable to offer support to my companions, defend myself, or even be released unless the casting mage was incapacitated mid-spell. The pain was too intense to do anything beyond riding the waves as they ebbed and flowed. I could barely see beyond the glimmer of the surrounding bubble of magic, so I could not tell how many enemies were present or how my companions were faring. Surprisingly, I could just make out the form of Morrigan standing in front of me as my guardian.
Morrigan, the apostate, a powerful shape-shifting mage, hardened and mistrustful from years of the solitary existence she shared with only her mother as her companion, had become an unlikely ally. She was honest, brutally so, and had lived a life so different from my own, that she sometimes pitied me, and I her, but we had shared a common bond, magic, and a respect for one another’s gifts, and thus the beginnings of a friendship had been born. She was quick to react, both physically and verbally, and she was powerful, a useful instrument in a fight. I felt her reach into the prison, trying to diffuse it, but pulling back quickly from the searing pain. I appreciated her effort nonetheless.
The sounds of swords striking were distorted, as was Keiko’s low warning growl, and the commanding shouts of Sten and Alistair as they ordered everyone into position for defense. There were strange sounds filling the cavern, and I could tell everyone had joined forces to fight off multiple enemies. I felt the prison’s effect waning, the spell was nearly at an end. I would have to react the moment it released me, having been weakened dramatically from the spell, and thus opening myself up for further attack.
Freedom. The moment my feet touched the ground, I sent out a shock wave to stun the surrounding enemies; it lasted just long enough for me to get my bearings and for us all to regroup. It took a great deal out of me and I fell to the ground exhausted, but I was able to see what had decided to infiltrate our group. Spiders. Enormous, horrifying spiders.
At the rear of the cavern, where it led beyond, stood a being distorted by the forest itself, a mage, perhaps once, but now a vessel for the magic of the forest. Vines and branches entwined its legs and torso. The skin had turned green, mostly, with hair that stood on end, twisted into a bizarre mass caked with mud and flora. It held no staff, but called forth energy from all the life forms surrounding it. This is what might lie in store for me here, if I dared to give into the wild, unharnessed side of my nature. I involuntarily shivered at the prospect.
Have a great week everyone!