Writing Prompt Challenge Accepted #17

I present to you my works of flash fiction.  My escape into free writing.  I don’t think too much, I don’t edit too much, and I don’t give myself too much time.  I hope you like ’em.

HandshakeThe Deal

It’s a common misconception that only the desperate seek me out. The greedy, the vain, the shallow, the scared, the lonely, and even the righteous have found their way to my door. Take a look at the world around you. Do you truly believe that all those people you envy got where they are on their own merit? No, my dear. Actually, that is quite laughable. And before you say a word, let me ponder what category you fit into and what it is you think you want.

Another misconception – the price. It’s never the same. So worry not that you may need x-amount of dollars, or a first born. My stocks are full and money hardly has its uses where I’m from. No, I will know the exact payment to accept from you.

You’re sweating. You’re worried. You should be. You have but mere moments to retreat. You won’t. I suppose it is the desperate that seek me out. They think they have no alternative. They lack the capacity for hard work, perseverance, mediocrity. That is why you are sitting here yourself…your own shortcomings. So let us strike the deal, and in the blink of an eye you will have all you ever dreamed of. I can’t wait to meet you again, to hear if it was worth it.

*The following Writing Prompt is a line of dialogue I included in #75 with the above image.  It was a two-fer.  As I had no image for it, I put the line in bold lettering, but it barely shows up, so it’s underlined as well.

Solidarity

We stood on the battlements side by side as we had every day for the past three years. It was going to be a beautiful day. The sun was still low on the horizon, but the sky was clear and the air was crisp. I turned my face skyward and closed my eyes. I took a deep breath hoping to smell the lavender planted in the garden, or the citrus trees that lined the path. The image of my love flashed once before my eyes, as it usually did, a bewitching smile upon the most alluring lips. Had I not looked down, it could be mistaken for any other day.

Is this one of those times you want me to lie to protect your delicate emotions?” My queen asked slyly. She stood tall with her hands behind her back, her chin defiantly jutted outward, and yet there was that gleam in her eye. She was a clever one, and it was one of the reasons I had stood by her. I unsheathed my sword and stretched my arm, feeling the weight of it. I lowered my gaze to the imposing army marching through the valley. I replied with my own air of nonchalance, “Seems as good a time as any.”

HandsWaiting

He sat alone in “their place”. The tentacles of dread weaving their destructive way through his mind. It didn’t stop there. The tingling continued down his spine, while it’s icy touch lingered around his heart. She had never been late, even when he expected her to be. After the many long months of separation, he was certain he would have found her running across the field in the hopes she would be running into his open arms. He stared out to the horizon for what felt like hours, trusting that one of those dots would grow larger and take her form. No such luck.

He did not fidget. He sat immobilized with the thoughts of the unknown. What if she did not return? How would he find her? He didn’t even know where she had been. What would he do…without her? His body felt heavy, crushed under the weight of the despair that had quickly materialized. Why did he not give her more credit? Clearly she had been able to take care of herself all this time. He swallowed back the lump that threatened to choke him, when he felt her warm touch. His whole body went slack with a relief that was almost as crushing.

Signal-PromptThe Signal

It was quiet, quieter than I expected. Without the engines humming, the normal sounds of operation, or even the sounds of life, it was as if we were walking into a crypt. Perhaps we were. The emergency lights gave off an eerie red glow, while some overhead lights flickered, each played with our vision equally. I swear I could see things moving in the shadows, but I knew it to be a trick of the imagination. We decided to split up, search the vessel for survivors and what may have happened to silence an entire ship and her crew.

I decided to head to the command deck in the hopes of retrieving the captain’s journal and the flight logs. The team would search the rest of this level before we headed further into the belly of the ship together. As I ascended the ladder that would allow me access to the upper deck, I called back in a harsh whisper, “If I need you I’ll give you a signal.” My companions all looked up with inquisitive eyes. “What signal?” “I’ll imitate the scream of a terrified little girl.” To that I received obligatory snorts and the shaking of heads. I winked once and continued upward.

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I’d love to read what you create, so don’t forget to share!  Take a look through the Writing Prompts and see what inspires you.  Happy Writing!

 

Writing Prompt #78

This week’s Writing Prompt is in the form of a dialogue prompt.  I have found a number of wonderful snippets that could be the beginnings of an intriguing story.

What do you think?

Signal-Prompt

Are you inspired?  I don’t know why I see someone going off to kill a big spider..?

Happy Writing!

Quote Monday

Besides the adorable-ness, the lessons are a great reminder of things (sometimes) forgotten with age.

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As writers, I think we, generally, embody 2 of the 3, with happiness getting lost from time to time.  Writers, historically, have been known to be melancholy, depressed, repressed, vice riddled, isolated, and any variant of the above and much more.  I think it’s a good lesson to remind ourselves to find happiness where and when we can, and to embrace it.

Curiosity is a staple among writers.  We wouldn’t write the stories we do if we weren’t full of wonder at the possibility of what if.  Our stories lead us to amazing places, and we learn about topics we may never have even considered before creating our new world.  Keep learning and keep growing because you never know where your next great idea will come from.

Another staple – the fight.  We fight for our characters.  We fight for our stories.  We believe in our babies and in order to get others to love them as we do, we have to fight to get them out into the world.  Even when you’re tired, don’t give up.  Success may be just a moment away.

I then thought about these words in regards to my characters.  They’re people too and they have their own lives to lead, and could probably use a friendly word.  Amidst their trials could they find a moment of happiness?  Do they have a cause or a reason to keep fighting?  A little food for thought.

Wishing you all the best!  And Happy Writing!

Writing Prompt #77

I’m feeling a little romantically inclined today.  Perhaps it’s because, in part, I’ve dreamt of Tom Hiddleston 4 out of the last 5 nights…I haven’t even seen him in anything recently, so who knows?!

The other part could be that I’m thinking about rewriting one of my scripts that is heavily imbued with romance, and so I’m trying to get in the right frame of mind.  Whatever the reason, you all get the benefit of a biased Writing Prompt this week.  So enjoy. 😉

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I had a specific idea when I saw this image, so I’m in.  Are you inspired to join me in this week’s Writing Prompt Challenge?

Happy Writing!

Take-aways from On Writing

OnWritingBookCoverWhile reading On Writing by Stephen King at the beginning of the year, I made notes, wherever was convenient at that particular moment – things I wanted to remember.  I like getting a resource messy – highlighting passages, underlying things, and making notes in the margins because the book is a tool, and although I felt that way about On Writing, I couldn’t force myself to mark up it’s pages.

In some way, I suppose, the book didn’t feel like a resource.  You know the kind.  You ear mark pages, and put in little sticky notes out the side to refer to at any given time.  His book was an easy read, a lesson, but not one I thought I would go back to in the same way.  I don’t know if that makes any sense…?

These are a few of the topics that stood out:

1.  Our influences as a child cause us to be “built” a certain way.  I can attest to that.  I was designed with a love for being swept off my feet and happily-ever-afters.  Of course, that’s not how my life has been, but those are the types of stories I want to write, regardless of how un-feminist it may be considered.  There’s enough darkness in the world, and movies are for escape.  Besides, fads come and go, and the desire for a feel good movie will always be in fashion.

2.  King noted that we write with one person in mind – the one we want to WOW.  For him it’s wife, for me it’s The Sis.  I never even thought about that until I saw the words on the page.  I do remember how proud I was that one of my screenplays made her cry, just a little.  She’s a tough nut to crack, and if I could get her teary-eyed, then I knew it worked.  I realized with his words, that it was her I wanted to impress, not the masses.  Although, yes, I want them to come running too.

3.  When you’ve finished writing your story, ask yourself, “Why did I bother?”  What was so important about this story that you had to tell it?  This is a great note to post on your computer or wherever you write.  Sometimes we get lost along the way, and this may help us remember the spark of the idea that instigated the story in the first place.  I wrote about this once in regards to my last full length feature I was working on.  I had sort of lost focus, hence the mid-stopping point.  Now I know how to get back into it.

As I’m trying to be better about sharing what I learn (and I am so behind in that), I thought you might find these ideas interesting while shedding a light on your own writing.

Do they strike you the same way they did me?

Happy Writing!

Goal Setting

After coming to the realization that I had accomplished very little last year, I decided to make some changes.  Any time you want to do anything, you have to be ready for the change.  You have to commit.  Going in all willy-nilly only leads to failure and subsequent disappointment.

DisciplineI wanted to be…better, in all aspects of my life.  So, I decided to mix things up and create for myself a new schedule that would lead me to the things I wanted.  I wanted to get fit, so I’ve made it a goal to work out every other day.  So far, I’ve been pretty good about it, and I do feel better.  I wanted to read more, since last year I didn’t read a single book, and I’m close to finishing no#5.  I wanted to write more, and I’m on a third rewrite of my tv pilot, I’ve written more fanfic, and I’ve taken on more Writing Prompt Challenges.

Additionally, I’m working on the show bible and making headway into the many writing books I’ve had on my shelf for years to determine which are truly useful.  The only “new thing” I wanted by now was a different job.  I’m still working on it.  Of course there are plenty of other things I’d like to do this year, but you know, one step at a time.

I’m not sure where I found this three step system, but I thought I would share it with you in the hopes that you can achieve your goals, writing or otherwise.

  1. Identify your big picture – brainstorm all the things you’d like to see yourself accomplishing and then streamline them into one overall phrase: “I want to…
  2. Outline the steps you need to take to accomplish the goal.
  3. Set benchmarks – create accountability and assess forward movement.  Set dates.

set and reach goal concept

Because of the job situation, which has lead to monetary issues, I am unable to enter any writing contests this year, which is disappointing.  Instead of looking at it as a negative, I’m trying to think of it as a gift – I have a year to get my writing “show” ready.

I printed out monthly calendars in order to set those benchmarks, dates when I want to have certain projects completed.  I’m working with only three months at a time, so it doesn’t seem so overwhelming.  I’ve tacked the calendars to the wall next to my computer to use as motivation.  I’m a big advocate for visually identifying deadlines.  Just holding on to the idea of a deadline somehow makes it feel less relevant.  Seeing that April 15th (let’s just say) date circled, highlighted, marked in red, or what-have-you gives it more weight, makes it feel more real and impending, and sometimes we need that pressure to get things done.

WhereFocusGoesLife gets busy.  It’s easy to get sidetracked.  Sometimes it’s comforting to get lost in TV and gaming, I should know, but in order to reach our goals and follow our dreams, we have to be relentless in that pursuit.

Not every step toward our goal needs to be a big one, even the small ones get us a little closer each day!

As you know, I love a good quote, so here are a few to keep you motivated:

And remember, it only takes a couple of weeks to create a new habit. 😉

Wishing you all the very best!

Writing Prompt #76

Happy Wednesday, my friends!

I’m taking a vacation from my pilot for another few days, because when I reread it after the last rewrite, I didn’t like it.  So today, I wanted to find an image that was as far removed from that story as possible, in the hopes I’ll write something else, and come back around with a clearer head.

The Invitation(*HP themed)

Are you inspired?

Happy Writing!

World Building, Character Creation, and Knowing When to Start Writing Part II

OriginSome time back in July, I wrote the first part of this topic.  You can read it here.  I can’t believe it took me until January to write the first draft of the pilot, which was what inspired that post – world building, etc.  (I was such a lump last year.)  I know I was excited by the idea, and the research phase did take some time, but it is clear that I lost my way and floundered for a while before I made the effort.  I remember just being clueless as to some decisions I needed to make.  There were so many things that didn’t seem right, and that derailed my enthusiasm.

My biggest hurdle, oddly enough, was in regards to my protagonist.  I had backstories and loads of ideas in place for all the other characters, but something about her was off.  I finally decided to do research on character development, in the hopes it would shine a light on her.  Here is a link to a few of the things I discovered, which may help you too, if you’re ever struggling.  Before I begin a story, after some research, I’m pretty sure of my characters, so this hurdle was new for me.

I mean, how could I not know who she is?!  She is the reason I’m writing the story.

I finished the rewrite of the pilot a couple of weeks ago, and it got me thinking that I never did come back to this topic, and I wanted to share a few things I learned along the way.  I had planned on continuing this topic some time closer to the original post, but now, who knows what I intended all those months ago..?!

Everyone develops a strategy for their writing over time.  We learn what works for us and what doesn’t.  I am not a fan of outlining, but I tried do create a rough outline so I knew what I wanted to hit within the pilot and where I wanted it to end.  This is one of the first times it sort of worked for me.  I have so many ideas for this story, and not writing a full length feature made it clear that while I needed to touch on some ideas, I only needed to allude to others.  Writing just one episode means leaving a lot open for later, and that is something I was not used to doing.  Also, by creating the rough outline, I had an idea of where I needed to interject the subplots, so that made it easier to see the holes.

ItsOnlyAFirstDraftTired of dragging my heels, I finally made it a point to write the first draft, regardless of how much information I was still lacking, and this was a huge step forward for me.  I’m one of those who painstakingly writes each word.  I tend to rewrite while I’m writing, and this causes a lot of lag time.  I wanted to pound out the first draft as quickly as possible (I think I wrote it in 3-4 days), then I would know what I was missing and how to proceed in my research and decision making.  So here is a suggestion for something I have never done before.

Knowing there were still things that needed names, or language issues, because I’m writing about aliens, I used asterisks or parentheses around words I knew would need to be changed in the rewrite.  I still didn’t know the name of the galactic order so I generically used the word Empire (thanks, Star Wars) and put an asterisk next to it.  It allowed me to continue the flow knowing it wasn’t a decision that needed to be made right then and there.  I did the same with alien terminology and location headers within the screenplay; anything really that I didn’t have an answer for right on the spot.

The other thing I learned was a way of introducing nearly a full cast in one scene.  I’ve never done this before, and I had to think of an activity that would showcase their individual personalities in a short amount of time.  During research mode, I wrote up note cards on each character which included where they were from, their race, occupation, positive and negative traits, and some background info.  This helped me to see how they would each respond in a given situation.  The first draft included a generic scene where all the characters were introduced and described, but I knew it didn’t work.  I put a big asterisk next to the scene and moved on.  Before the rewrite, I thought about the different kinds of group activities that could take place, but it was one thing in particular that made the difference.

I had been limited in my thinking.  World building includes a number of topics to take into consideration – there’s government, military, religion, customs, and trade, all of which I had thought about, but I hadn’t thought about entertainment.  What did my characters do for fun?  How did they blow off steam?  It didn’t take long after that to figure out their new introduction.

Crane'sWar - JulianFaylonaMy last insight is this.  Fantasy and sci-fi, in particular, allow for a number of freedoms in their stories, but it also offers writers the opportunity to highlight social and political issues under this guise.  Just another topic to consider while you’re world building.  Is there something going on in the world that you want to talk about?  Setting your story against an alien/fantasy backdrop may offer you the freedom to share your insight.  This is something I learned years ago, when I decided I didn’t want my first story to be just a fluff piece.  I utilize my fantasy and sci-fi worlds to highlight the current state of humanity, the deterioration of the environment, and the pros and cons in the advancement of technology.

There is a lot to think about when creating a world from scratch, and I’ve just touched on a few.  It’s a lot of fun because it truly is a blank slate, and this is one reason research is so important, but don’t let it become the sole focus for too long.  Keep your momentum, and try a variety of tricks to help you get that story out as quickly as possible.  You’ll have plenty of rewrites to work out the details.

I’ve been trying to keep an eye out on Pinterest for writing tips as well, so click here, for some more.  If you’ve learned any tricks along the way, please share and let’s help each other make great stories!

Happy Writing!

Writing Prompt #75

It’s Wednesday and you know what that means…It’s Writing Prompt Day!

I was torn this week between two things – an image and a line of dialogue.  Instead of trying to choose between them, I’ll share them both, and let you decide which (or both) inspires you.

1:

Is this one of those times you want me to lie to protect your delicate emotions?

2:  I’ve been rewatching episodes of Supernatural, so that may have influenced this decision. 😉

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If you’ve ever visited my Pinterest page, you already know how much I enjoy imagery.  If you have a great image for writing inspiration, please share!  And don’t forget to share your creations if you’re inspired by any of the Writing Prompts.  There are some past images along the side –>, but if you’d like to take a look at any of the previous 74, search “Writing Prompts” and write away!

Happy Writing!

Quote Monday

I just finished reading The Giver by Lois Lowry.  It was a book The Sis had recommended I read, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.  Quick premise: The story is about a society where people’s choices have become extinct.  In an effort to make everyone the same, the community has instilled rules and methods that maintain a norm that no one questions, except for Jonas, after being chosen to be the Receiver of Memory.

It’s a Newbery Medal winner and it’s one of those novels that makes you reflect upon your own life.  It makes you wonder if having your elders choose for you, both your career and your mate, is not better.  When given our own lives to govern, how often do we make the wrong choices?  It’s the difference between free will and the greater good, so to speak.

I’ve been encouraged to do something I really don’t want to do, in part because it holds no true value or long term security, and yet, it’s still being offered up as the right choice.  Left with few other alternatives, it’s quickly becoming the only choice, and I resent it.  How did this happen?  I feel, sometimes, like I lost myself along the way.  Not in my writing life, but in my “real” life.

I need the wise words of a mentor.  If you’re out there, please find me! 😉

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This week’s quote seems rather apropos in light of my current circumstance.  As creatives, we’re already marching to the beat of our own drummer.  Now we only have to be brave enough to see where it leads.

Best wishes!