I’m Baaack (and I Have a Few Things to Share)

Hi everyone!

GISHWHES has ended and I’m trying to return to my abnormal normal.  That routine I love so much was completely lost in a week full of chaos, slapdash, and mind-numbing exhaustion.  Saturday I had to put my house back together, and Sunday I slept about 12 hours and still only felt partially coherent.  There’s still cleaning, laundry, and reorganizing to be done, but for now, at least I can see my floor again.  For a little insight into what we do, one of my team members created a Tumblr account last year and has been slowly adding pictures from this year’s hunt.  You’ll quickly understand that I am not joking when I say it’s a crazy week; 15 people to a team, usually not in the same place, trying to accomplish 185 items.  Madness.

So, now that that’s over, I need to get back to work.  It will probably take a few days to read all the articles and such that are pending in my inbox, but here are a couple things in particular I’d like to share, both found via Aerogramme Writers’ Studio –

1.  The Cesar Egido Serrano Foundation’s ‘Museum of Words’ International Flash Fiction Contest is accepting entries until November 23rd. The competition is for very short fiction pieces (max of 100 words).  Top prize is $20,000, with three runners-up each receiving $2,000.  Not too shabby. 🙂  Here’s the link for more information.

2.  Wattpad (this is the link to the article) – for writers and readers.  This sounds like a wonderful opportunity, and as I’m still making my way through this labyrinth of information, if any of you are familiar with this site, please share your insights.

And to get myself back on track, here’s the quote of the week:

Sometimes we have to let things go

Happy Monday!  And best wishes to you!

Quotes of the Week

I’m still a little scattered…not sure why exactly.  I feel pressured, and a little anxious.  It’s making me raise my eyebrow a bit too often.  So I’m posting a few quotes on focus, as I’m probably not the only person struggling with this, in the hopes we will all get back on track.

*MakeItHappen    *HowFarYou'veCome    *OneBrick    *IgnoreTheNoise

Wishing you all well!

The Smurfette Syndrome

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I took a Women’s Studies class in college, in part because it fulfilled a credit requirement, but I quickly learned it was one of the best classes I would ever take.  It really opened my eyes, and it was then that I slowly began to look at the world differently.  I would also learn that I am a bit of a feminist, but don’t let that sway you. 🙂

I don’t think I made a conscious effort to alter my writing, but the types of stories I wanted to tell were definitely intended more for women.  The majority of my scripts have predominately female casts.  Those were a conscious decision.  The funny thing is, this started long before I learned that there was a growing problem in Hollywood, the place I want to be a part of, in the continuation of a lack of a female presence, both in front and behind the camera.

The Smurfette Syndrome aka “the token” girl has continued its prevalence according to the numbers this summer at the movies.  I saw this article about the trend and felt it deserved a share.  There was also this article from a little while ago from the NY Film Academy.  I can’t remember if I shared it before, but it also discusses the inequality in the numbers.

So what’s my point?  Be sure to include the other half of the population in your storytelling, and not in just some token capacity.  Create an opportunity to balance out the scales.  Since many novels are now the basis for films, it would be wonderful to see a surge to encourage a change.  I’m not saying that you have to change all your characters from male to female, but be aware of stereotypes, and don’t perpetuate the trend.  Think of the younger generation.  How they need more role models in their literature and entertainment.  I mean seriously, no solo Wonder Women movie yet?  The fact that Disney is not planning on releasing any further Princess Leia merchandise?  Maybe the lower numbers at the box office is the start of this awareness.

I guess the phrase “change starts at home” might be some of the most useful advice to encourage diversity.

Write well, my friends!

From Far Away It’s Okay, But Up Close It’s A Big Ol’ Mess

Write&LiveI was a little absent this week.  I had a bit going on, had let some things slide then had to play catch up, and now it’s Friday.  I have a few things to share, so I’m going to lump them in this post, and then post this week’s Writing Prompt separately.  Yep, I’m behind…

I had fallen into a little bit of a rut the past couple of weeks, and on Sunday, despite protests from my sister, took her to Downtown Disney for a little getaway.  Disneyland is our happy place, and since we got our little pups (2 years ago now), we haven’t had an opportunity to go because they have little bladders and can’t be left for too long.  That’s going to change.  I realized walking amidst the throng of people how much I missed it, even if we were only Disneyland adjacent.  Lego had put up a couple of new displays that made me squeal like the girl I am.IMG_1124  *Excuse the lighting, my iPhone camera sucks in the dark.  But yes, that is Maleficent the dragon fighting Prince Philip.  There was also Beauty and the Beast.  Again, insert squeal.

And I also got to see Lady Gaga this week, so there’s that. 🙂

So here are the things I’d like to share:

1. Bang2Write is offering free downloads.  Although primarily for screenwriters, there are a couple of downloads that would prove useful to all writers.

2. There was this funny post about “You know you’re a writer when…” #17, #22, and #29 all made me laugh aloud.

3. I came across this interesting article regarding Writer’s Block from Chuck Wendig.

I have more, but I’ll leave them for another day. 😉  And yes, that is a Clueless reference in the title.  I felt that the jumble that is this post was deserving of such.

Happy Friday!  Have a wonderful weekend!

Writing To Your Strengths

SmilingEmoticonComedy is hard, or so it’s been said.  When I let a fellow writer read my first script, Fate(s), one of his notes was I should make it funnier.  It’s not a rom-com I countered, but he thought it would work well with more humor.  That gave me reason to pause.

I don’t think I’m a funny person.  I know I have a dry sense of humor.  I know I laugh sometimes at some subtle nuance that no one else notices, example, the remake of Fright Night (written by Marti Noxon who worked on Buffy the Vampire Slayer, so I was preconditioned to already enjoy it); a half full theater and my sister and I were the only ones laughing at these little off-handed remarks or random things.  That surprised me.  I like to laugh, I like people who can make me laugh, but I don’t really know how to write that.  I haven’t given it a real effort, in part, because the stories I tell don’t naturally lend themselves to comedy.  There can be elements of humor, but to make it even on a romantic comedy level is beyond me, let alone a full blown comedy.

*Side note, my sister and I are many years apart, and although I’m the big sister, she has taught me a few things too.  She enjoys things that are a little on the darker side, and showed me that a film like American Psycho is actually funny.  Yes, it’s dark and twisted, but if you watch it more than once, you’ll see the comedy.  I think exposing ourselves to a variety of genres and different styles can only add to our knowledge banks as writers.

This lead me to a couple of thoughts.  One, I appreciate the people who can write comedy and make me laugh even more.  Two, as a writer, if you find yourself lacking in an area, what are you to do?

Let’s start with #1 – a few random examples of what I would consider funny.

Archer – an animated show about a spy agency created by Adam Reed.  From the very first moment I was hooked.  The show is wonderfully written with distinct characters, and it looks good.  There are two particular techniques I appreciate; they often use the last line of dialogue of one character to lead into dialogue of another character in another scene.  Where one leads off, another begins.  I can’t imagine how difficult that must be to write like that.  The other technique is that the writers established a fully developed world and characters with backstory from the first scene. *Available on Netflix

Little Britain – a sketch comedy show created by Matt Lucas and David Walliams.  This is a little bit on the niche side.  If you don’t watch British comedy in general, then you may not find this as funny as I do.  Also, as it is a sketch comedy, not all sketches are of equal measure, but because it’s British, they can get away with some sight gags that literally made me burst out with laughter and some language and themes that our prudish little country (the States) would only allow on premium cable channels.  The show was popular enough to garner a US spinoff, which unfortunately is not available on Netflix, but *most of the original series is.

The Lego Movie – no description should be necessary as this was a big mainstream hit, with a sequel greenlit a few weeks of its opening.  Besides being adorable, I mean c’mon, it’s Lego, it was humorous, good natured, and clever, and you didn’t have to play with Lego* as a kid to enjoy it.  I laughed nearly the entire time, I left feeling good, and with most films nowadays, how often does that happen?  Maybe in part because it’s animated, it allows for visuals that would otherwise be difficult to capture.  Again, it’s those little nuances that I enjoy.

If you review the list, the first thing you might realize is that they are all different variations of comedy, and secondly, that they all have multiple writers; tv shows have writers’ rooms, full length features tend to get rewritten by numerous other people beyond the original writer.  The Lego Movie has six writer credits, four for story and two for screenplay.  So maybe comedy works best in teams?

So that brings me around to topic #2, what to do if you’re deficient in an area.  As writers, screenwriters in particular, we are told to write in a genre and to build a portfolio in an effort to distinguish ourselves.  I think one of the first things to do is write to our strengths.  When we first start writing, we try a few different avenues until we find what works for us.  This doesn’t mean that we can’t grow and change.  I currently write reality based fantasies with romance,  but that doesn’t mean I don’t want to write something else in the future.  What it does mean is that I may have to find outside help.

Let’s say I want to write a comedy, by some stretch of the imagination.  I would definitely need to find a partner.  I would probably need to take some sort of comedy class, do some stand up (I cringe at the thought), and go into heavy research mode.  I would have to teach myself, and learn from others, but this doesn’t ensure I could write something funny.  I think some things are innate.  Comedy being one of those things.  This made me pause again.

I’m not sure if not having a specific writing trait should be considered a deficiency or a shortcoming.  There are genres for a reason.  I like to read and watch a variety of genres, but as of right now I like to write in one in particular.  Does that mean if someone thinks I should write with more humor that I listen to that advice?  I think we should write to our strengths.  I think we should write with passion.  That is what will translate.

What are your thoughts?

*Evidently, even though it sounds wrong, the plural of Lego is Lego.

The Unexpected Side of Doctor Who

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Happy 4th of July to my fellow Americans!

For those of you enjoying a long weekend (and just in general), the urge to do a little binge watching might be an option.  There was a recent article about the cons of binge watching, and I have learned this first hand.  Not all shows are meant to be watched in such a manner, of course there are exceptions…the following is not one of them.

I haven’t paid for television in about three years, and even before I found it hard to keep up with everything anyway, so my television viewing has been altered.  If they don’t stream it, then I don’t watch it, until Netflix or the like picks it up, and then the binge happens.

Case in point, Doctor Who.  I really didn’t know anything about this show before now, in part because I didn’t know anyone who watched it.  If I lived in England, as I long to, this would obviously never have happened.  I had caught one episode years ago that left me clueless as to what was going on, and because I didn’t have anyone to talk to about it, I didn’t seek the show out again.  Circle around to present day, there’s a lot of talk about the new doctor and the premiere of the new season (or series, in England), I have found people who in fact watch it, and I thought, “I am a geek.  I should know about this.” and so the binge begins.  *Side note, I’m one of those that ignores the bandwagon, or tries to, so says my stubborn mind.  If everybody loves something, and I didn’t get in on it early, it takes me a really, really long time to come around and give in.  I could give lots of examples, but that’s for another day.  I’m sure this is some remnant from my stubborn youth.

So I decide to jump on the Doctor Who bandwagon, starting with the newer episodes that began in 2005 with Christopher Eccleston (who I loved from Elizabeth – he was the villain as the Duke of Norfolk, but more recently he was Malekith in Thor: The Dark World.), not those (not yet anyway) that are now considered “Classic” Doctor Who that began in 1963.  Here’s a quick synopsis, for those of you who have no idea, like I did…

“The Doctor” is a time and space traveling, nearly immortal, 900 year old alien known as a Time Lord.  Their race regenerates when they are near death, and hence, a new Doctor is born.  (This is why there are numerous Doctors.  Technically, they are the same “person”, having taken a new form, and although the memories and knowledge of all his years remain, each new Doctor has a different personality.)  A deadly war with the Daleks has left him alone as the last of his kind, so he travels endlessly in his space ship which is disguised as a blue police phone box known as the Tardis.  He usually finds an attractive English woman to join him along his journeys to show her the universe and to sate his loneliness.

I am on to my third Doctor, Matt Smith, but it is due to the events that precede him that I have stalled in my viewing.  Here is what I shall describe as “the unexpected side” of Doctor Who. *No spoilers, I promise.

It is surprisingly depressing.  There is a bit of a corny, campy nature in The Doctor, and yet there is often a great deal of tragedy either happening or in the works.  The writers will kill people off, separate them, and create a loneliness in The Doctor that is so palpable, I just want to give him a hug, often.  I already cry at everything, but this show has really struck me on occasion, causing me to sob, twice, but most nights when I’m done watching, I’m just depressed.  It’s not the happy go lucky show it presents itself on the surface, or maybe that’s just what I thought it was going to be.  This is the conundrum of having a character like The Doctor who is quirky, witty, and so likeable placed among such heavy handed themes, such as saving the world (a lot), offering salvation to your archenemy, watching people sacrifice themselves for your salvation, and losing the one you love to a rift between parallel worlds.

Gracious.  Someone could have warned me.

During David Tennant’s 10th Doctor era, who quickly became my favorite person with his tall, lanky, great hair, and adorable face -ness, there were a few moments that made me not want to watch the show any further.  And when it was time for yet another new Doctor, because I was so fond of the last one, it was like starting a brand new show, and my affections do not wane so easily.

The show is brilliant in its imaginative inventiveness.  It has created dozens of races and worlds, crazy story lines, and it is a joy to watch…in small increments.  Take my word for it.  Many episodes have been written by Steven Moffat or Mark Gatiss, of Sherlock fame, and if you’re an avid fan of British tv and film, there are lots of guest appearances from familiar faces.  As a screenwriter, this show would be great to write a spec for, because you can do almost anything.  Some of the episodes are so…well, strange, but as a writer it would be so freeing.  So on that level, it’s good to watch.  And once you do, you’ll probably be hooked, like I am.  I just need a little more time to become accustomed to a new face, which is why you get so much time off between seasons…

Have a great weekend everyone!  And here’s to binge watching! 😉

A Quote & Some Tricks for Being More Creative

I like quotes, as I’m sure you’ve noticed.  Some people just say the right thing and why not share their words of wisdom?  So here is this week’s quote, something as writers we probably all need to keep in mind…because we all have those days. 🙂

Patience is not the ability to wait, but the ability to keep a good attitude while waiting. – Joyce Meyer

TypewriterFontWriterAnd not to leave it at that, I thought I’d share this article from the wonderful people at The Write Life, 3 Ways to Train Your Brain to be More Creative, which is designed to help freelancers in particular, but from which we could all benefit.

One trick is to get into a routine.  And we all love that.  I write my screenplays primarily at night when the house is quiet, the courtyard of my building is quiet, it’s dark and I can’t see how lovely it is outside, and when my phone won’t ding.  I’ve always been this way.  I switched to writing my blog and doing “homework” during the daylight hours though, so I feel there’s a separation in my work.

One of the other tricks is to do something fun beforehand in order to warm up your brain.  The author references Pavlov.  On my old laptop I used to play a few hands of solitaire, now I play a little Tetris on my computer, because my original Nintendo system is old.  Yes, I still have it.  I don’t need to do this all the time, not anymore, I’ve trained myself.  But when I get stuck on some facet in my writing, I will play a little Tetris, which doesn’t take any thought process, my hands just keep working, and I can usually work out the problem.  I think it has to do with not trying to force the solution.  I allow my brain to work it out without concentrating solely on it; it keeps working even though I feel like I shut it off.

I hope you find this helpful.

Have a wonderful and productive week!

A Few Rewriting Tips

EditingIn a recent post, I mentioned the brain dead side effect of rewriting.  I am happy to relay that I have at least kept up the momentum, for a whole three days now.  My goal is 15 pgs. a day and I have made it to page 50 in my script, but I am nearing the corner towards that dastardly Act III, so the ambitious page count may falter in the coming days.  And of course, I’ve had another idea for the third act.  Maybe I should write a novel, then I could use all the story ideas I’ve had and propose them as “if you turned left instead of right, this could’ve happened” story lines.

I went to film school, but many of the tools I have learned for screenwriting have come from my own research and interest in bettering my writing; books, articles, and teleconferences.  If you’ve read some of my other posts in regards to the differences between screenwriting and novel writing, you’ll understand what a different mindset screenwriting requires, but I’m not going to go into those details here.  This one is meant for rewriting.

I thought I’d share a few tips, some good ones, or those that I think are good because I found they made the biggest direct impact.  These tips are more inclined for screenwriters, but some of them should be helpful to writers of all forms.  Most of us know about cutting scenes that don’t move story, creating subtext in dialogue, and making sure there’s conflict, etc. but here are a few others I’ve been keeping in mind during this final (please let this be my final) rewrite.  Also, thanks to irscriptwriter who encouraged me to stick with my two spaces after a period rule because it was causing aneurysms. 🙂

1. Wordsmithing – more meaning with fewer words.  For screenwriters this is key as a page count limits us.  It also means to take generic words like “walks” and replace it with saunters, struts, or lumbers which immediately gives the reader a visual and negates further description.

2.  Imagine the location or setting and try to describe it in three vivid and evocative terms.  Do the same with your characters.  As with wordsmithing, the right word can have multiple meanings, and immediately stir the reader’s imagination.

3.  Make the script fun to read.  Screenplays have a specific format, but you can build momentum and action by the style on the page.  We create the story and how the reader will follow it, so in that we have freedom.  There’s also an unspoken rule of making blocks of action only four lines a piece so the reader doesn’t skip through larger blocks of text, just FYI.

4.  Make it a silent film.  Read only the action.  Would a reader still understand what’s happening?  This helps solve the “talking head” problem where exposition is given via dialogue.

I have pages upon pages of rewriting tips, so if anyone is interested in more, I will share them in another post.

Have a great weekend everyone!

Another Tool For Screenwriters (& Maybe Your Next Interview)

HelpfulTips“Tell me a little bit about yourself.”  A statement we’ve heard time and time again during interviews, but who knew the importance of that question when you’re trying to sell a screenplay?  Thankfully I came across this article, The Deal Closer: Your Personal Narrative by screenwriting career coach Lee Jessup, because as screenwriters we needed one more thing to worry about. 😉  To sum up the article, the basic idea is that our writing can be wonderful, but so must we.  Selling our work the first time out is rare, but in order to work – staff writing positions, contract work – we must be able to sell ourselves as well.  Let me add this to my Professional To Do List: #19.  *I exhale a heavy sigh at the revelation of one more element to master.

Have a wonderful weekend!